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Jeremy's avatar

Damn, what a great way to make a buck! If only he waited around, he could’ve gotten a free coffee out of it too.

But I think this was very believable. So, reads like a success for your more free writing experiment to me!

Laura Teodorescu's avatar

Thank you! It may or may not have been based, slightly, on a guy I knew in university haha

JamesLuo's avatar

This "Daniel blinked slowly, like an old dog drifting to sleep" is a great line!

Laura Teodorescu's avatar

Thank you! And thank you for reading!

Ricardo A. Martagón's avatar

Haha. Daniel the Menace! This so captures the weirdness of first dates.